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My name is Valerie Noga. I’m 18 and I grew up in a small town called Vernon in New Jersey. I graduated from Vernon Township High School and am now attending Kent State University. I'm hoping to become a nursing major and go on to have a nursing career go figure. My parents mean a lot to me because they have done the best they can to raise me and get me a good education. I have an older brother named Kenny who i barley talk to. He attends school at Juniata. My friends are my world though I dnk where I would be in life w\o them. I love to just be with them and go out to movies and hang outs. My best friend Ashley is still back in Vernon waiting for school to start. My boyfriend is trying to get into some branch of the military. He isn’t 100% sure if he wants to do marines or navy seals. I have a jr black belt in karate. Turns out karate is where I ended up meeting the best people in my life (my friends). I believe I am a pretty down to earth person, who tends to care more about how others feel then my own feelings. That’s pretty much all about me I’m also a pretty simple person.

My name is Valerie S, Noga, and I grew up in a small town called Vernon in New Jersey. I graduated from Vernon Township High School and am now attending Kent State University. I hope to become a part of the nursing program here at Kent and peruse a career in nursing My parents names are Kenneth and Mary Noga and they have done everything to get me where I am today. I have an older sibling named Kenny Noga who is attending school at Juniata in PA. I'm a down to earth person who cares more about others feeling then my own. I earned a junior black belt in karate and threw karate is where I met some of the most amazing friends. I met my best friend Ashley who is still back in NJ waiting for school my boyfriend Scott who is joining some type of military either the marines or the navy seals. That’s just about all there is about me I am a simple person.

The prosses was easy because i wrote the more personal one first so all i had to do was change the wording and make it sound more appropriate and take out all the slang terms and spelling mistakes. The first blog is more personal where i can use sarcasm and not worry about really spelling and i can use slang terms. The audience will get a more real version on me. I'm satisfied with both the blogs but i think the second one is less personal.